It's pretty good, it's a bit boring to listen to before it picks up at 0:35 because it's a little repetitive and nothing is really going on. However, after it picks up it's awesome! No repetitiveness at all and it's just really, really interesting to listen to.
Nice.
Thank you!
There is actually some vocals at start but I can't upload em in newgrounds since those vocals are from game.
Should have added something else to start for making it more intresting :S
Thank you for review!
This is really really good. I like the buildup and use of instruments.
My only thing is that I'm not sure this is jazz.
Favorited.
I threw a jazz organ in there, so I called it jazz. I'm really not sure what genre you'd call this.
This is an awesome dance song. And don't be sorry if your vocals are Russian, Russia's fuckin' awesome.
Anyway, it's very well done and it all blends well. I like how the music changes when you start singing. It sounds like an actual song you'd hear in a nightclub.
Thanks, may be later translate in English that Russian vocals)
That's not a bad little rap. Funny, too.
That was a pretty good taunt to the others.
Good luck.
Thanks buddy! :D
Not bad, but not perfect either. The sound of the song is just a tad distorted, and it's very repetitive and all 'chorus' if you know what I mean.
Keep trying, you'll get it soon.
lol i know what ya mean :) i just wanted to put a clearer version of what i had when i was high. not even sure im going to do anything withit.
You did a really good job making this! Very impressive. I really like how you executed the ending. You did a great job, give yourself a pat on the back.
While this is a good song in general, it's not particularly my cup of tea. Since this was entered in a contest, I'll review you in my own personal opinion and through the eyes of the contest judges.
The mixing is really quite good, although it is very repetitive, you did a great job building this song, I didn't hear any bad notes, save one or maybe two. So not bad at all.
Contest-wise, this could either be a hit or miss. In my eyes you could write a song about a biodome in two ways. One, what you did, with the safe and happy feeling. Or, two (I woulda done this one) make it a bit spacey, and safe-ish sounding, but add a creepy, eerie sense of mystery with a slight tinge of fear of the outside. If I were judging, I would prefer the latter, but hey, you never know.
Good luck.
Thanks :)
At first I was going to do such spacey thing, but I really didn't get such "spark" to it. Instead, when looking at the other image our artist provided, this was the outcome. Contest-wise, it was a miss, as people didn't really think of a biodome as a place of safety and happiness D: Oh well
Thanks for the rev
This is a really great song. I like the incorporation of different kinds of instruments, like the electric guitar, and that sweet horror movie sound at 1:30.
I think you have a real chance at winning this contest you're in. Good luck, friend.
Thank you my friend for the kind words and well wishing. Really appreciate but there are really awesome entries already in the contest and I can sense some great composers are coming soon. I am happy that I have finally participated in some NG contest :)
Bro you're getting really good at this.
Great techno track. Put that in a nightclub or something.
God I love ska, though it feels like I'm the only who can actually understand the words. This is a great song, I'll check out more of your stuff.
Nobody can understand the words unless they read them. This is what happens when you think "I should write a song where I spit out the words super fast like an early Suicide Machines song!" :P
Thanks for the review.
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