cosmic and baller af!!! yr friend rlly does make good ass music!

omg i cant wait for chapter 3 where jockington is tragically revealed to be a closeted gay guy in an abusive family household and he gets a big gun in the shape of a roulette wheel and kills berdly against his will and we still don't see papyrus

ty cherry fortune!! i liked this :) i also rlly liked cyberdevil's suggestions ! could be cool cool cool :D

wheee so fun my high score was 78!

i thought this was so fun but that power-up where you become an invincible hitbox is terrible!! you should make it blink or smth before it goes away.

this is cool and i rlly like the presentation, but due to how tight the spacing is to navigate these corridors, and how you basically have to perfectly line up the timing for passing the flame spouts, i didn't bother playing past the 2nd level. too pedantic, idk!!
still there is a lot of style here and i really liked that!!!

that snare click sticks out like a sore thumb, but overall i can hear a very pleasant sound here. I hear that you're going for an elevator/bg vibe, but i think the washover of reverb is muddling the track rather than defining it. I love the pad/e.piano/bass on the lows, i think it melds so well with the main melody.

this is nice, but yeah, just needs to be mixed a bit differently imo.

edit - the mixing is a lot more consistent with the new version but..... omg this is gonna make me sound insane but i think that snare click should have a liiiittle bit more punch imo. a middle ground lol, between the initial upload and this current version.

0:00 -:30 this is some heavy wild pushing melody out of the ether and i really love the effort and the vision

0:31- 2:24 when it drops the first time i'm enjoying the energy but ultimately. i wish it hadn't been breakcore! 0:53 --1:34 i honestly just don't vibe with this genre that much, i find there's not enough space on the levels to allow the features to breathe. it was very jumpyjumpyjumpy which is cool it's just not for me.

2:27-onward is a seashell wide as the shoreline pouring out this static wave of sonic capacity and it washes over me and i do love what you've done with this ending.

truly i think i'd love to death a song that more encapsulated the ending and beginning, and pushed the boundaries a little more -- i feel like there is a vision there!

okay so maybe i'm crazy but i happened to open to this song while another song was playing (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mj9NasdFH9A) and especially around the middle, the two songs really almost complement each other in a weird way when played simultaneously!! i thought that was kinda cool lol

I liked this song though, by itself, of course! If I had to critique anything, I feel like a lot of the instrumental elements were all kinda sharing a similar space on the audial plane, on like the mid-high section? I feel like my ear would be more satisfied if the low end was catered to a bit more.

Other than that, I really enjoyed the song's strong balance of urgency and calm. Very cool!! :)

I hope yr doing well and i hope the rest of this album proceeds well :!!

i love the coloring and background work here. you do such an amazing job complementing these two elements, it's such a distinct skill over lots of art i see on this site!! fr well done -- that budding energy blast and the focus in the eyes are everything. you're really tapping into something special in yr art yk???

I LOVE THE SECOND ONE!! There is so much character and conversation in the expressions and interactions. i love the symbolic triangle background. this is soooo good. i love yr style! very distinct, yet restrained. love love love

this is so cute! what a vibe

i'll say the perspective feels a little off here, like the depth is really shallow? for instance the grey bit doesnt really look like a raising or cut of the floor but it kinda makes it looks like a two-paneled image.

regardless, i still really enjoy this piece :)