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the effects and the echoing melody in the middle are cool as hell,

the melody sounds like it wants to beat me up but then the pads are like DONT WORRY ILL PROTECT YOU very cool

i like this!!! weird spacey vibes are SUCH a jam. i actually find the offkilter sounds endearing personally, but i agree that too much of anything, even a good thing, can sour over time -- it'd be nice if those notes shifted or altered in some way throughout the track. they do however, give the piece a unique spacey sort of identity. thank you for sharing, its very fun :)

Charlmot responds:

I get what you mean, i see how it could be a bit much for some people, but still THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I really appreciate the feedback!!! :D

jumping on to say that im on the outro-to-documentary train for this one lol

the track does a great job at maintaining a forward sound, never falling overtly to repetition, and its still so cohesive amd flows immaculately from start to finish!!! really dope, congrats on the front page :)

Charlmot responds:

Thank you so much!!!! Thats so kind :D

there is ultimately a positive energy to this track, a spaciness, a sensuality, a sense of relief! it transported me to an early date going well or a project that suffered many roadblocks being finished. very enjoyable, thank you for sharing :)

Charlmot responds:

Im glad you enjoyed it! :)

the initial sound is suuuuper intriguing and im on board,, although at :45 i do wish we could incorporate some new elements. the new instrument being implemented at a 1:00+~ with very little other change to the core doesn't do a lot for me personally but I can see where your head is at! the additional adding and subtracting of new elements while the core melody stays more or less the same isn't the most attractive songwriting methods and the piece can feel disjointed as a result. i really enjoy all the individual sounds here and i think you have a good ear for funky little rhythms! i encourage you to play with your core sound and let that branch out and around as well as your inclusion of new elements!

thank you for sharing :)

the melody is so so cute and i really like the lyrical flow it is all very chill and fun and evocative of a lot of different things. the only critique i might have is that the mix is pretty skewed to the drums, which have a grating bit of gain on them. i think if you took that notch down just a little bit i would have no issues!!

i really liked this thank you for sharing :))))

the big energy here is pretty fun. i like the song in its quieter moments the best, the outro especially was a treat for me. the way the intro comes in with these big bells and the stompy drums creates a cool atmosphere and i love the shrill stabbing synths. and the reverse scream sound at like 1:15 is crazy cool. at this point the song seems to stagnate a bit, from 1:30 up until the outro, and i feel like it could stand to be a little shorter for that reason. maybe because there's not much of a bridge? im not sure. regardless, i really like the outro!!

Mesage responds:

thank you for your feedback! it was a pleasure reading this and I'm glad you liked it!
I regret that I rushed the 1:30 to outro part.
I'll try not to make such mistakes again.

shredding is real! the metaphorically speaking bit was very funny

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