clearly a lot of work went into this and it's got all my love for that!! also, girl's field hockey is hardly a well-loved sport in the grand scale of media so i think it's so wonderful that you gave the sport this much love!
that being said, i think there's wayy too much packed in here, and some of the sequences are so contextually bombastic from scene-to-scene,, part of me just wishes we focused on more actual field hockey and less of the super-charged fighting scenes. likewise, the masquerade/ghost aspect seems a bit confusing -- because the two are banned, they have to fake a new identity, but they can only add one fake person to the team? it's a bit odd, and maybe a bit overstuffed, at least for a 3 minute short.
again, i loved the beginning dynamics. the animation and presentation is cool and sleek throughout.