there's some real horror here at the end, pretty unexpected -- i wasn't picturing much from the angle and setup, but this like, internal imagery was very cool! i'm into it and think you should lean into this kinda horror!
there's some real horror here at the end, pretty unexpected -- i wasn't picturing much from the angle and setup, but this like, internal imagery was very cool! i'm into it and think you should lean into this kinda horror!
hahahahHWHHAHAHWHHAHWHAT THE FUVCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
this idea is so gold, and the format/style is so sleek wowow
really fucking out there, but cohesive enough to follow. touching, at times. really inspired work to be sure -- salutay big dog!!!
Salutay, Jimmy!
the skeletons are so funny, and i love how Bugsy says "we" to his hostage as if he isn't the only one in the room lol
Natural Readers - Rod is the best VA in the fucking game
i deadass love FLOUNDERMANCLOCK he has such a way with CARS
clearly a lot of work went into this and it's got all my love for that!! also, girl's field hockey is hardly a well-loved sport in the grand scale of media so i think it's so wonderful that you gave the sport this much love!
that being said, i think there's wayy too much packed in here, and some of the sequences are so contextually bombastic from scene-to-scene,, part of me just wishes we focused on more actual field hockey and less of the super-charged fighting scenes. likewise, the masquerade/ghost aspect seems a bit confusing -- because the two are banned, they have to fake a new identity, but they can only add one fake person to the team? it's a bit odd, and maybe a bit overstuffed, at least for a 3 minute short.
again, i loved the beginning dynamics. the animation and presentation is cool and sleek throughout.
very kind
i was grateful to have seen this animation.
actually laughed at the ending --
gethefuckoutta my way kid!!
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