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00:45-1:00 i found myself piquing into the song
1:15~ a sour note i kinda noticed
2:27~ reintroduction of the drums here was in a satisfying place, not too obvious :)
2:36 that silent portion doesn't really work -- it's too brief and not defined enough; i literally just thought my phone had gone off or something! definitely consider the length of silence spaces! how much silence can quickly transfer one feeling to another.

OVERALL I liked this piece, I thought it was fun and moon-faced in a pleasant way, a midnight blue sky in my mind! I do feel like the tinny and repetitive aspects of the instrument soundsets you used draw things down a bit in the song as far as genuine replayability but the core is there! The feeling is there! I enjoyed my time with the song.

averyocean65 responds:

Thanks for the constructive feedback! I'll be sure to take it into account with any future pieces I create!

very relaxing, kinda solemn, but mainly a sunset. i enjoyed this a lot, ty!

this was pleasant, thank you! I enjoyed the mixing of the vocals to the music :)

LordAndiso responds:

Thank you :))

this is hype! really nice work :)

Yooo sick man! This was a very cool listen, I hope you're doing well after all these years

This has been one of my favorite late night songs for years. Every time I get a new phone one of the first things I do is come and download this track. Thank you.

spikel responds:

Wow thank you!

I definitely took in the bright starry night atmosphere of this track! It was sweet.

I can tell by your description you know the issues with track.. it's a bit repetitious.

I enjoyed the climax and the ending was satisfying, too!

I'm glad I heard this song :)

trevor8 responds:

Ah, thanks for the input!

Pretty atmospheric and builds a very nice tension. This track gets done what it sets out to do and it does it very well. Nice job.

Vahnson responds:

ty. tried something new. my girl recommended it. thanks again.

This is different. And that's probably the best thing I can say about it. This track very easily allowed me to reach back in the recesses of my imagination and float away with it. This has an actual personality. Not just personality in that being "It sounds cool and unique hur hur." No, it feels as if this song that you've created has actual thoughts and emotions. It's not amazing, and at times, this song disappoints me. But it's different. Typically, this would make me dislike the track, and say "It let me down." It never got to that climax. With this song though, that's okay. It makes sense with the flow here. Like a human being, it's imperfect. But that's what makes this song so GOOD. I love this track. It's honest and genuine with itself, and I love it. By the time I was done listening to it, I felt like I was saying goodbye to an old friend.

Thank you for making this.

GotWeez responds:

I spent a lot of time on this piece, so I do really appreciate it. You're very welcome :D

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