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JimmyTheCaterpillar

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the first minute of this song is flawless.

- it's so rare and awesome to be completely sold on a song within the first 3 seconds. really killer opening for REAL.
- I feel like the build-up portion from 0:30-1:00 goes on a little toooo long, and i feel like if it was cut in half it would be a lot more satisfying from a dance perspective.
- the drop is really stellar though dope dope dope.
- i think the toms that are behind the bass are a little toooo bongo-y for the sake of the hardness of the song, but maybe that's opinion.
- whatever that drone is at 2:07-2:14 is godlike.
- the repetition of 0:30-1:00 kinda reaffirms to me that it feels outta place with the rest of the song's mood, but the drop still goes just as hard and i LOVE the drums that are present here.
- i could definitely see this playing at the warehouse club i go to sometimes, really cool shit thank you for making this kind of song. (also if you left a review on one of my songs i'd super appreciate it!!)

the high pitched synth at 0:28-1:10 is superrr charming. the guitar that follows too, is very lovely. these instruments overlaid on the foundation of the track give the track a certain kindness that I think is wonderful especially in a genre like techno.

I found the drop at 1:53 to be a bit toothless honestly, and thought that the big orchestral pad after wasn't as fitting for the rest of the song -- which is further evidenced by the quaint little bird chirping sounds that are after.

i really love the interesting variations of the lead instrument here and how cute they all are. i think that's kinda innovative.

thanks for sharing this! I enjoyed listening. if you wanna leave me a review on one of my songs too i'd appreciate it :)

this is cool! I'd say the biggest area to improve with this particular song is that it seems so much of the song is taking place on the same channel.

the bass/rhythm pad is super buried under the punch of the drums. I also wish we could stay with each portion of the song longer. this wants to be a 4 minute song no doubt.

I want to sink my teeth heavy into the intro chords, like a wind blowing across marshland. and that repeats for each segment, really..

ultimately i think this song is so dope, the sounds, and the mood and all but it is so clustered together and could use some wringing out. i hope this helps!

such a full song. goes hard. kinda reminiscent of carpenter brut almost. thank you!

the effects and the echoing melody in the middle are cool as hell,

the melody sounds like it wants to beat me up but then the pads are like DONT WORRY ILL PROTECT YOU very cool

i like this!!! weird spacey vibes are SUCH a jam. i actually find the offkilter sounds endearing personally, but i agree that too much of anything, even a good thing, can sour over time -- it'd be nice if those notes shifted or altered in some way throughout the track. they do however, give the piece a unique spacey sort of identity. thank you for sharing, its very fun :)

Charlmot responds:

I get what you mean, i see how it could be a bit much for some people, but still THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I really appreciate the feedback!!! :D

jumping on to say that im on the outro-to-documentary train for this one lol

the track does a great job at maintaining a forward sound, never falling overtly to repetition, and its still so cohesive amd flows immaculately from start to finish!!! really dope, congrats on the front page :)

Charlmot responds:

Thank you so much!!!! Thats so kind :D

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