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i think some more bass would help flesh this song out, as well as some additional drum parts. i really kept hoping for some hihats or other cymbals, more bass drum hits etc! despite that, the synth is fun and varied, and the snare is interesting and snappy throughout. the pacing of the song is good, though i feel the beginning was maybe a hair too long? the ending however, felt right! :D i enjoyed the work! ty for sharing

Themon4 responds:

I updated the song and now its 2 times better thank you

shawty like a m*scooby doo running* was my fav part here lol

the female-sounding vocals emerging from that first crescendo was really inspired. you're building a valley of a scene here for sure, a forge!! it's the moment!!!! i also loved the guys coming back to fade out at the end the track, i cracked up a little bit !! thank you for sharing

Tensemusic responds:

Thank you Jimmy, I really appreciate the details of your feedback. Thank you so much! Have a nice day!

keyboards with features are hype! i will waste hours on them lol

i wish it had just a little bit more of an ending. mainly though. i was biiig chillin listening to this while playing w/ my cats!!!!

so thank you for sharing this :)

i really like the feeling here. there's a sense of walking down city streets at night, a subdued urgency -- patient excitement.

i think you have a great sense of timing in how long each segment is -- great timing!

i think some better, more cohesive soundsets would do you wonders? i feel like the melodic devices were there, but the timbre on some of the instruments just kinda slap against each other.

the ending felt a bit tacked off, but i'm sure you can come up with a better one!

again i liked this a lot and i think you have a lot of room to grow. keep the energy!!!!

Themon4 responds:

Id say this one is one of my bad songs tho😅, Also thank you for commenting, when I saw a comment in the notifs I got realy happy you made my day.

fucking loved this!!!! sidewalk gritty and just the right amount of math in there, i can really feel the heart in here. i realized it started to get a little samey around the minute mark or so but it's just a demo so i believe in u :)

I really enjoyed the intro into the first main segment at :50 or so, after that though the track loses my interest just a little bit -- I feel as if the transitional portions between the fuller parts kinda outstay themselves just a bit, even though the full parts are definitely worth it. That being said, the synths and pads you're using are all very fun and bouncy!! 3:02-3:10 is awesome!!!!!

Congrats on yr friend's engagement!!!!! very nice of you to make a song for them :)

LooPeR231 responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

I really liked this! The vocals matched together really well with the track, really adding to it! I feel like the mixing was pretty strong. I liked the bass in the song. The song ends kind of abruptly and I hear some sort of clipping or shorting of the notes in the guitar solo, though I enjoyed the solo, very cool. Throughout the song the drums sounded pretty much the same with only a couple unique fills, while I felt like there were a few spots you could have given them a bit more flavor? but overall the song held my interest all the way through, and the emotion built in the track was really palpable!

from the review4review bbs :)

this shit is the MOMENT man holy shit this is the real shit, the way the drop just strides in at 2:53 and says oh hello there prepare 2 get rock3d omygod!!!!! i'm gonna go buy an egg timer rn and then throw it in the GARBAGE bc you're really doin it here -- thank you so much for uploading this, i'm mad grateful!!! i'll be listening to your other work too, this is some really inspired work !!!

akabomb responds:

thank you so much for the kind words :)

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