JimmyTheCaterpillar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[crap city]

Not bad, but not perfect either. The sound of the song is just a tad distorted, and it's very repetitive and all 'chorus' if you know what I mean.

Keep trying, you'll get it soon.

Ghost21b responds:

lol i know what ya mean :) i just wanted to put a clearer version of what i had when i was high. not even sure im going to do anything withit.

[Slender in 8bits]

You did a really good job making this! Very impressive. I really like how you executed the ending. You did a great job, give yourself a pat on the back.

[Safe inside the dome]

While this is a good song in general, it's not particularly my cup of tea. Since this was entered in a contest, I'll review you in my own personal opinion and through the eyes of the contest judges.

The mixing is really quite good, although it is very repetitive, you did a great job building this song, I didn't hear any bad notes, save one or maybe two. So not bad at all.

Contest-wise, this could either be a hit or miss. In my eyes you could write a song about a biodome in two ways. One, what you did, with the safe and happy feeling. Or, two (I woulda done this one) make it a bit spacey, and safe-ish sounding, but add a creepy, eerie sense of mystery with a slight tinge of fear of the outside. If I were judging, I would prefer the latter, but hey, you never know.

Good luck.

Jernemies responds:

Thanks :)
At first I was going to do such spacey thing, but I really didn't get such "spark" to it. Instead, when looking at the other image our artist provided, this was the outcome. Contest-wise, it was a miss, as people didn't really think of a biodome as a place of safety and happiness D: Oh well
Thanks for the rev

[Final Siege]

This is a really great song. I like the incorporation of different kinds of instruments, like the electric guitar, and that sweet horror movie sound at 1:30.

I think you have a real chance at winning this contest you're in. Good luck, friend.

Emid responds:

Thank you my friend for the kind words and well wishing. Really appreciate but there are really awesome entries already in the contest and I can sense some great composers are coming soon. I am happy that I have finally participated in some NG contest :)

[NGF-Aperture]

Bro you're getting really good at this.

Great techno track. Put that in a nightclub or something.

[Sandwich Slayer]

God I love ska, though it feels like I'm the only who can actually understand the words. This is a great song, I'll check out more of your stuff.

Clastodon responds:

Nobody can understand the words unless they read them. This is what happens when you think "I should write a song where I spit out the words super fast like an early Suicide Machines song!" :P

Thanks for the review.

[Short Film Score]

It was really quite good for what it is, although I wanted so dearly for it to pick up and be it's own song and not just the tune in the background of a video.

I really suggest you turn this into a whole song, because it really really could be something amazing.

[Down and Up]

This is about as industrial as it gets I suppose. You did good with the instruments, though you could've done better, as it sounded a little repetitive at parts. Regardless, this isn't bad, but it needs work.

Oh, one little thing; would ya turn down the volume just a little? I like loud music but not to the point where I'm deaf for five minutes.

[Minecraft Desert (JTTAS)]

Now, this is a really good track! I really like how it incorporates jazz and a lot of genres related to jazz, but retaining that Radiohead-ish sound. You guys are great musicians when you really want to be. Keep it up!

Favorited.

SelfSufficient responds:

Thanks! It was a complete live improvisation on my camera but we plan on revisiting it and re-recording it in the future, we have also wrote some new parts since and have vocals for bits and pieces of the song (though I envision it being mostly instrumental) We have a really catchy chorus planned. I guess if I had one thing I could say to people checking out our music is this: There's a lot of different types of music we play! If you aren't too wild about one track, check out the others, we have over 200 different songs and many of them incorporate vastly different elements.

[Rats, Kids and Bones]

Das some quality growling. Very quality.

My only suggestion, make the actual instruments sound a little louder, especially during the parts with no vocals. It sounded a bit weak, and I'm sure you don't want that.

Otherwise this is great!

Rotscreck responds:

thak you very much, the growling is mine !eh eh, as far as the mix, we didn't personally made the mixing, and i assure you our sound technician was about to throw things at us because he had to manage three guitars doing three different things, not funny. Thank you again anyway !