Right off the bat I enjoyed the tension of the intro, and the bendiness at 0:06-0:07 and 0:12-0:13.
you have a great sense of control in the opening pacing, I love how the drums are introduced sparsely and how they organically grow into a heavy buildup for the drop.
The drop is really excellent and it isn't a heavy, clumsy drop either, it's like a slide instead. It's so good and very satisfying.
(at this midpoint in the song I'm really struggling to come up with anything to really critique, or something that you could do better, LOL all this is making me want to do is check out your album)
at about 2:20, I kind of feel that the core melody may be a bit exhausted, and some note switchups or chord changes, or even some extra little drum fills could really benefit the song as it gets to the finish. I would love some flourish here!
Overall, the opening, buildup, and initial drop, and past that is just about as good as I could really ask!! It gets a liiiiittle dry to a point near the end, but wowowowow this is really good, and I liked it a lot -- so thank you so much for sharing!! :)
- from the Review4Review thread -