the restraint here is so real!! it's a bit adhd in its presentation, but this song has a lot going for it !!
the restraint here is so real!! it's a bit adhd in its presentation, but this song has a lot going for it !!
eq is really blown out!!!!! hard 2 listen to 4 me -- tragedy! i really enjoyed the parts from 1:16-1:22, 1:59-2:11, i feel like these parts get the core chaos of the song and the energy desired. i don't think the track needs to bust my ear drums 2 go crazy. do you though!!! I liked basically 2:11 and on, the rest of the song tones the mixing down and a bit and has a lot of nice little bits and flourishes in there.
pretty wild energy, thank you 4 sharing!!
this is so awesome -- i love each individual part, it's such a tapestry!!! i really just kinda don't like dubstep but that doesn't mean i can't think this song is so dope -- very dancey, very hype.
Thank you so much! I wanted to give it that more "chunked" build where the progression is very obvious! I was honestly expecting negative feedback but comments like this certainly reaffirm me :D Thank you again!
very very dope!!! I really enjoyed the voices' inclusion at the end :)
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This is suuuchhh a vibe, really enjoyed having it on in the background, thank you!!
craziest, idk -- more like silky fucking smooth, damn this was such a vibe all the way through!!!
the xylophone gettin NUTTY on this one !!! :D
progression is very fun and spontaneous here without ever feeling unnatural!!! I really liked this!
really enjoyed the chimes at 0:52 or so, it was really noticeable when they got louder with no variation in their progression though. the horn sounded a bit "nasally" in comparison to the rest of the track -- but i really enjoyed the vibe overall. very futuristic, kinda reminiscent to me of something that'd be in Va1-HallA! i enjoyed the piece, thank you :)
yeah i forgot to add it to the description but its literally my first ever composition so also take that to the equation
this was really nice!!! i love the mood forged by the piece, I enjoyed the progressions -- they were a little predictable, but honestly i didn't even mind, so pleasant was the piece. I also feel like you could have let the drums in a bit more throughout the song as opposed to just in the middle, but overall!!!! I really feel like you conveyed an optimistic lovely morning -- thank you!!!
cooool! ^^
very cute!
i love the little liquid drops you have sprinkled deep in the mix :) // the transition at 1:17 is very nice too. // i think as the song goes on, the lack of a palpable/consistent bass kinda becomes apparent. it shows up in the middle and then kinda goes away intermittently?? // the toppling at 2:47-3:13 gives the track some danger and more personality which is very pleasant !! // the ending flourish was nice too!
overall i think the eq could be lowered a littleee bit but this is a super fun track with a lotttt of personality and i really enjoyed my time with it!!! :D ty for sharing!
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