love how the single notes fill into the longer notes in the beginning --
the drums are cool, though i admit they feel a littleee out-of-place with the rest of the song, maybe they're a little too loud?
the single droning beeping note that persists through the beginning of the song and then throughout gets really noticeable around 1:20, i wish it would change up a bit or give the rest of the song room to breathe -- it's one of those things that once you realize, you can't help but hone in on it. the slow-down it undertakes around 2:00 is a welcome shift in that regard.
I actually really like how the outro slows everything down, it's really gentle.
cool track, ty :)