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some really lovely cohesion here with the different sounds, it's all so sweet and lovely.

i feel like the first half could honestly maybe do to lean a bit more into a noise-scape sorta vibe, as it is clearly trying to be melodic, but the pace is so slow and drawn out that i found my attention waning a little,, (but it's a sleepytime jam so idk what i was expecting lol!)

when things start to pick up a bit more around the 1:50 mark, i am intrigued and very lulled by the pleasantness -- I find the pad coming in at 2:00 to be a little overpowering as it is immediately present. i like its inclusion in the piece, so maybe I'd just fade it in a bit more -- the little 3note repetition bell you have going is so gold though, it really ties everything else together in the 2nd half so well -- i honestly LOVE the second half,, i even wish it were longer -- its two minutes but it really feels like it flashes by, much like a good dream.

the end works -- though i really wish that bell crept through just a bit more closer to the end of the song.

i really enjoyed this thank you :D

i very much enjoyed the track, but tbh even moreso i deeply appreciated the length in which you go here to talk about your process in sculpting it. i found your words to be very thought-provoking and kind of inspiring in a creative-peer sense. i really enjoy seeing the passion shine through in all aspects, and i believe in you!!! thank you for sharing this :)

this is some real shit,,, i've had it on in the bg for like half an hour now -- love it

from ng radio -
i really enjoyed the layering bit with the voices going aaahhh-ahhhhhh :)

from ng radio -
the vibe here rocks. ty for making this!

dustin2006 responds:

Thank you for listening.

i enjoyed having this on in the bg thanks to ng radio :)

really enjoyed the spacey dreamy feel of this!!

i love the emotion here, very cool mixing!

pretty dope

i think some more bass would help flesh this song out, as well as some additional drum parts. i really kept hoping for some hihats or other cymbals, more bass drum hits etc! despite that, the synth is fun and varied, and the snare is interesting and snappy throughout. the pacing of the song is good, though i feel the beginning was maybe a hair too long? the ending however, felt right! :D i enjoyed the work! ty for sharing

Themon4 responds:

I updated the song and now its 2 times better thank you

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