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i really like the way you're implementing voice in yr work!

Vosh responds:

thanks

this is hype -- i really enjoy the mood here

-- i think maybe shortening the middle quiet segment just a bit would probably help keep the interest, that's the only part where mine wavered -- mainly bc the instrumental wasn't really doing anything different beyond being quiet -- and i LOVE the main riff you have going here, but i def think a little variation throughout the rest of the song would do you well.

but good stuff regardless :)

Vosh responds:

thanks, but i must studing at school, so i haven't time to make something hard. This is just hobby

very lovely and compassionate. your grandmother must have been the same. wishing you well!

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

She most certainly was. Thank you! <3

some really lovely cohesion here with the different sounds, it's all so sweet and lovely.

i feel like the first half could honestly maybe do to lean a bit more into a noise-scape sorta vibe, as it is clearly trying to be melodic, but the pace is so slow and drawn out that i found my attention waning a little,, (but it's a sleepytime jam so idk what i was expecting lol!)

when things start to pick up a bit more around the 1:50 mark, i am intrigued and very lulled by the pleasantness -- I find the pad coming in at 2:00 to be a little overpowering as it is immediately present. i like its inclusion in the piece, so maybe I'd just fade it in a bit more -- the little 3note repetition bell you have going is so gold though, it really ties everything else together in the 2nd half so well -- i honestly LOVE the second half,, i even wish it were longer -- its two minutes but it really feels like it flashes by, much like a good dream.

the end works -- though i really wish that bell crept through just a bit more closer to the end of the song.

i really enjoyed this thank you :D

i very much enjoyed the track, but tbh even moreso i deeply appreciated the length in which you go here to talk about your process in sculpting it. i found your words to be very thought-provoking and kind of inspiring in a creative-peer sense. i really enjoy seeing the passion shine through in all aspects, and i believe in you!!! thank you for sharing this :)

this is some real shit,,, i've had it on in the bg for like half an hour now -- love it

from ng radio -
i really enjoyed the layering bit with the voices going aaahhh-ahhhhhh :)

from ng radio -
the vibe here rocks. ty for making this!

dustin2006 responds:

Thank you for listening.

i enjoyed having this on in the bg thanks to ng radio :)

really enjoyed the spacey dreamy feel of this!!

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