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this sounds cool and i LOVE your vision, the sounds that you're working with. followed for SURE!!! ultimately, i feel like the first half of the track sounds cool as hell, but could definitely use some more varied drums. not like dnb or anything but at least some fills in there or smth yk?

the transition at 0:54 is everything you want it to be. it's fucking awesome!
I love how the reversed chords still play intermittently during the new section.

i love the... filter (i think?) placed over the composition to give it that kinda ps1 soundfont. it sounds very cool.

i find myself really wanting the bpm to ramp up a bit and for it be a bit more excited, or rather, i feel like the core riff loop never gets too much variation over the course of the song and ultimately, the song's length isn't totally earned.

I definitely DO really like the sound -- like a lot!!! the foundation is THERE and it's AWESOME, I just feel like not enough happens to that sound. lots of stuff happens, but it doesn't all build up to anywhere, yk?

more fzero is always always welcome,, i love your own unique flavors that you implemented here !!

i really like the backing in the 2nd half. it meshes with the forefront so well, gives the track a great sense of body and depth.

i feel like overall not a lot of unique stuff is happening here but this is very well-crafted nonetheless ; i would dance 2 it at the club 4sure

Axsou responds:

Thanks, I wish I made this one instead of my first vip because it wasn’t accepted at the formal I went to, there is a quite unique collab in the works though (if I can finish it lol)

love the way the scratching sample gets played with here throughout, though at times it feels just a hair offbeat.

the track is pretty lowkey but the quality is not! you have a great ear for structure & its super super impressive you made tracktober work. keep up the passion, you can go really far!

200andSeven responds:

thanks for the feedback!! excited to do this again next year 🙌🙌

super tired rn so i cant go into super detail BUT i liked this a lot!!!!!!!!!!

200andSeven responds:

haha glad you liked it!

how the fuck have yall not been scouted yet. love your efforts let's be friends

sloggermusic responds:

Thanks so much!!!!!

yoooo this goes crazy!!! i wish there were maybe some higher chords/pads implemented around the middle of the song but this is a common Themon4 W as far as I can tell

i loveee the bridge bit at 2:04-2:16

this is the moment damn!!

this one is going for a dreamy vibe i can tell, and I really like the concept here, but it ultimately comes across a little emptier than celestial. maybe give those chimes/bells a bit more air or echo or something. something to fill the space in this loop.

i'm glad i could listen to another one of your loops! you do killer work :)

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