this is cool! I'd say the biggest area to improve with this particular song is that it seems so much of the song is taking place on the same channel.
the bass/rhythm pad is super buried under the punch of the drums. I also wish we could stay with each portion of the song longer. this wants to be a 4 minute song no doubt.
I want to sink my teeth heavy into the intro chords, like a wind blowing across marshland. and that repeats for each segment, really..
ultimately i think this song is so dope, the sounds, and the mood and all but it is so clustered together and could use some wringing out. i hope this helps!