JimmyTheCaterpillar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[oaoaoaoaoaoa]

the initial sound is suuuuper intriguing and im on board,, although at :45 i do wish we could incorporate some new elements. the new instrument being implemented at a 1:00+~ with very little other change to the core doesn't do a lot for me personally but I can see where your head is at! the additional adding and subtracting of new elements while the core melody stays more or less the same isn't the most attractive songwriting methods and the piece can feel disjointed as a result. i really enjoy all the individual sounds here and i think you have a good ear for funky little rhythms! i encourage you to play with your core sound and let that branch out and around as well as your inclusion of new elements!

thank you for sharing :)

[Mesage - Criminal Mission]

the big energy here is pretty fun. i like the song in its quieter moments the best, the outro especially was a treat for me. the way the intro comes in with these big bells and the stompy drums creates a cool atmosphere and i love the shrill stabbing synths. and the reverse scream sound at like 1:15 is crazy cool. at this point the song seems to stagnate a bit, from 1:30 up until the outro, and i feel like it could stand to be a little shorter for that reason. maybe because there's not much of a bridge? im not sure. regardless, i really like the outro!!

Mesage responds:

thank you for your feedback! it was a pleasure reading this and I'm glad you liked it!
I regret that I rushed the 1:30 to outro part.
I'll try not to make such mistakes again.

[yes im piss yes im shit]

shredding is real! the metaphorically speaking bit was very funny

[bleed from my seed]

fuckin hardcore 🦈🦈🦈🦈

[House of Jubilation]

eerie is definitely right! am I hearing strategically based wrong notes? It's interesting. the pitch is super high, so I couldn't listen to it very loudly but, there is a mood here. very striking tone that I think matches with the title super well. it's very unsettling in how hard the song is almost, like, grinning at me. I really appreciate that the song strikes the way it does without getting too hyper and speedy about it.

yorusa responds:

thanks a lot for reviewing i appreciate it

[Mirror (Radio Edit) - JustiXian]

I feel like the vocals are operating on a different key than the rest of the song. It sounds a little like square peg in the round hole. It's quite jarring, especially when the rest of the song is generally nice and inoffensive (for better or for worse) the re-drop that cuts the vocals out sets the piece back on track and the ending bit that starts at 2:40 is probably my favorite portion of the song overall. It's the most uniquely voiced portion of the song, whereas a lot of the first half is YouTube-Vlogger intro-y. I think this is my problem, though? I'm not sure... I feel like the song feels just a little cookie-cutter for the genre and I am left wanting more of what makes you as a producer tick. It seems very general in its progression and instrumentation. I hope this doesn't come across as rude. I wish you the best!

JustikShow responds:

Yo! Thanks for your review. I'll keep on trying to do my best.

[Shok - Samuri Theme]

yo i love this whoa

[GAT⊕R TR⊕UBLE]

i let this rock on loop for a while ,, good shit, very nice :)

we love the alligators!

Charlmot responds:

Very much appreciated, glad you liked it!