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this is cool! I'd say the biggest area to improve with this particular song is that it seems so much of the song is taking place on the same channel.

the bass/rhythm pad is super buried under the punch of the drums. I also wish we could stay with each portion of the song longer. this wants to be a 4 minute song no doubt.

I want to sink my teeth heavy into the intro chords, like a wind blowing across marshland. and that repeats for each segment, really..

ultimately i think this song is so dope, the sounds, and the mood and all but it is so clustered together and could use some wringing out. i hope this helps!

such a full song. goes hard. kinda reminiscent of carpenter brut almost. thank you!

the effects and the echoing melody in the middle are cool as hell,

the melody sounds like it wants to beat me up but then the pads are like DONT WORRY ILL PROTECT YOU very cool

i like this!!! weird spacey vibes are SUCH a jam. i actually find the offkilter sounds endearing personally, but i agree that too much of anything, even a good thing, can sour over time -- it'd be nice if those notes shifted or altered in some way throughout the track. they do however, give the piece a unique spacey sort of identity. thank you for sharing, its very fun :)

Charlmot responds:

I get what you mean, i see how it could be a bit much for some people, but still THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I really appreciate the feedback!!! :D

jumping on to say that im on the outro-to-documentary train for this one lol

the track does a great job at maintaining a forward sound, never falling overtly to repetition, and its still so cohesive amd flows immaculately from start to finish!!! really dope, congrats on the front page :)

Charlmot responds:

Thank you so much!!!! Thats so kind :D

there is ultimately a positive energy to this track, a spaciness, a sensuality, a sense of relief! it transported me to an early date going well or a project that suffered many roadblocks being finished. very enjoyable, thank you for sharing :)

Charlmot responds:

Im glad you enjoyed it! :)

the initial sound is suuuuper intriguing and im on board,, although at :45 i do wish we could incorporate some new elements. the new instrument being implemented at a 1:00+~ with very little other change to the core doesn't do a lot for me personally but I can see where your head is at! the additional adding and subtracting of new elements while the core melody stays more or less the same isn't the most attractive songwriting methods and the piece can feel disjointed as a result. i really enjoy all the individual sounds here and i think you have a good ear for funky little rhythms! i encourage you to play with your core sound and let that branch out and around as well as your inclusion of new elements!

thank you for sharing :)

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