the snare sounds a little wet here and the fade-out near the end doesn't work exaactlyyy but you're really making strides!!!!! I love the subtle melody coursing underneath the main sounds, very lovely work!!!! truly one of the songest songs C:
the snare sounds a little wet here and the fade-out near the end doesn't work exaactlyyy but you're really making strides!!!!! I love the subtle melody coursing underneath the main sounds, very lovely work!!!! truly one of the songest songs C:
Heh, thanks this one had audio issue from the start, I tried to fix them but It only made it worse, and then I wanted to back track because It was worse now and you can kinda see where that went. Thank you for the response!
LOL math doesn't define you!!!!! maybe in some ways, in a literal sense,, but certainly not in a figurative one !! you got it!!! you can overcome >:))))
ah, i think i found that "in the action" piece you were talking about :D
I think this track could benefit big from some bass and maybe a slight scale back on the EQ of the primary string instrument.
as always, your sense of song structure is really strong! you are really good at intuitively letting your tracks bend in interesting direction -- keep it up!!!!!!! this was very enjoyable!
this excels in the night sky man
i love the subdued lofi elements in a track that isn't completed encased by them. the waves in the background provided a really wonderful metronome and i love the way you used the pad! such great work :DD
thank you ! ^^
really cool work!!!! could easily be in a game and rock someone's world!!!
very chill! spaceyyy
thanks! :D
i love this so much!!!! i love the voice sample, it's so perfectly integrated into the flesh of the track. each instrument is pared to its key elements and it's so good! i loved the little bit of melody at the end to fresh things up. this rocks!!
the restraint here is so real!! it's a bit adhd in its presentation, but this song has a lot going for it !!
eq is really blown out!!!!! hard 2 listen to 4 me -- tragedy! i really enjoyed the parts from 1:16-1:22, 1:59-2:11, i feel like these parts get the core chaos of the song and the energy desired. i don't think the track needs to bust my ear drums 2 go crazy. do you though!!! I liked basically 2:11 and on, the rest of the song tones the mixing down and a bit and has a lot of nice little bits and flourishes in there.
pretty wild energy, thank you 4 sharing!!
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