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This is really really good. I like the buildup and use of instruments.

My only thing is that I'm not sure this is jazz.

Favorited.

StaticBunny responds:

I threw a jazz organ in there, so I called it jazz. I'm really not sure what genre you'd call this.

That's not a bad little rap. Funny, too.

That was a pretty good taunt to the others.

Good luck.

DivoFST responds:

Thanks buddy! :D

Not bad, but not perfect either. The sound of the song is just a tad distorted, and it's very repetitive and all 'chorus' if you know what I mean.

Keep trying, you'll get it soon.

Ghost21b responds:

lol i know what ya mean :) i just wanted to put a clearer version of what i had when i was high. not even sure im going to do anything withit.

While this is a good song in general, it's not particularly my cup of tea. Since this was entered in a contest, I'll review you in my own personal opinion and through the eyes of the contest judges.

The mixing is really quite good, although it is very repetitive, you did a great job building this song, I didn't hear any bad notes, save one or maybe two. So not bad at all.

Contest-wise, this could either be a hit or miss. In my eyes you could write a song about a biodome in two ways. One, what you did, with the safe and happy feeling. Or, two (I woulda done this one) make it a bit spacey, and safe-ish sounding, but add a creepy, eerie sense of mystery with a slight tinge of fear of the outside. If I were judging, I would prefer the latter, but hey, you never know.

Good luck.

Jernemies responds:

Thanks :)
At first I was going to do such spacey thing, but I really didn't get such "spark" to it. Instead, when looking at the other image our artist provided, this was the outcome. Contest-wise, it was a miss, as people didn't really think of a biodome as a place of safety and happiness D: Oh well
Thanks for the rev

This is a really great song. I like the incorporation of different kinds of instruments, like the electric guitar, and that sweet horror movie sound at 1:30.

I think you have a real chance at winning this contest you're in. Good luck, friend.

Emid responds:

Thank you my friend for the kind words and well wishing. Really appreciate but there are really awesome entries already in the contest and I can sense some great composers are coming soon. I am happy that I have finally participated in some NG contest :)

God I love ska, though it feels like I'm the only who can actually understand the words. This is a great song, I'll check out more of your stuff.

Clastodon responds:

Nobody can understand the words unless they read them. This is what happens when you think "I should write a song where I spit out the words super fast like an early Suicide Machines song!" :P

Thanks for the review.

Das some quality growling. Very quality.

My only suggestion, make the actual instruments sound a little louder, especially during the parts with no vocals. It sounded a bit weak, and I'm sure you don't want that.

Otherwise this is great!

Rotscreck responds:

thak you very much, the growling is mine !eh eh, as far as the mix, we didn't personally made the mixing, and i assure you our sound technician was about to throw things at us because he had to manage three guitars doing three different things, not funny. Thank you again anyway !

This is some really good mixing, bro. That's a favorite.

PHIctitious5 responds:

awesome - ill keep it up!

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