JimmyTheCaterpillar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The moment]

the female-sounding vocals emerging from that first crescendo was really inspired. you're building a valley of a scene here for sure, a forge!! it's the moment!!!! i also loved the guys coming back to fade out at the end the track, i cracked up a little bit !! thank you for sharing

Tensemusic responds:

Thank you Jimmy, I really appreciate the details of your feedback. Thank you so much! Have a nice day!

[360°]

i really like the feeling here. there's a sense of walking down city streets at night, a subdued urgency -- patient excitement.

i think you have a great sense of timing in how long each segment is -- great timing!

i think some better, more cohesive soundsets would do you wonders? i feel like the melodic devices were there, but the timbre on some of the instruments just kinda slap against each other.

the ending felt a bit tacked off, but i'm sure you can come up with a better one!

again i liked this a lot and i think you have a lot of room to grow. keep the energy!!!!

Themon4 responds:

Id say this one is one of my bad songs tho😅, Also thank you for commenting, when I saw a comment in the notifs I got realy happy you made my day.

[Fluffy]

I really enjoyed the intro into the first main segment at :50 or so, after that though the track loses my interest just a little bit -- I feel as if the transitional portions between the fuller parts kinda outstay themselves just a bit, even though the full parts are definitely worth it. That being said, the synths and pads you're using are all very fun and bouncy!! 3:02-3:10 is awesome!!!!!

Congrats on yr friend's engagement!!!!! very nice of you to make a song for them :)

LooPeR231 responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

[20210216_130417]

this shit is the MOMENT man holy shit this is the real shit, the way the drop just strides in at 2:53 and says oh hello there prepare 2 get rock3d omygod!!!!! i'm gonna go buy an egg timer rn and then throw it in the GARBAGE bc you're really doin it here -- thank you so much for uploading this, i'm mad grateful!!! i'll be listening to your other work too, this is some really inspired work !!!

akabomb responds:

thank you so much for the kind words :)

[CARNAGE]

lol i love the idea here but damn this shit is WET, can't imagine when or where i'd listen to this again, but it seems like it was real fun 2 make

Pansexygoat responds:

Mostly experimenting tbh. All my music is just me messing around

[FALLING THROUGH TIME]

super dreamy pleasant track!! was big chilling to it while it played in the bg! i think that long glitch effect was really brave and jarring as fuckkkk but i have a friend that insists music should seek to illicit more primal responses so sure i'll go with that!

averyocean65 responds:

Haha, sorry for scaring you with that transition!

[NIGHTFALL]

00:45-1:00 i found myself piquing into the song
1:15~ a sour note i kinda noticed
2:27~ reintroduction of the drums here was in a satisfying place, not too obvious :)
2:36 that silent portion doesn't really work -- it's too brief and not defined enough; i literally just thought my phone had gone off or something! definitely consider the length of silence spaces! how much silence can quickly transfer one feeling to another.

OVERALL I liked this piece, I thought it was fun and moon-faced in a pleasant way, a midnight blue sky in my mind! I do feel like the tinny and repetitive aspects of the instrument soundsets you used draw things down a bit in the song as far as genuine replayability but the core is there! The feeling is there! I enjoyed my time with the song.

averyocean65 responds:

Thanks for the constructive feedback! I'll be sure to take it into account with any future pieces I create!

[Smile]

this was pleasant, thank you! I enjoyed the mixing of the vocals to the music :)

LordAndiso responds:

Thank you :))

[Yorke]

This has been one of my favorite late night songs for years. Every time I get a new phone one of the first things I do is come and download this track. Thank you.

spikel responds:

Wow thank you!