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the big energy here is pretty fun. i like the song in its quieter moments the best, the outro especially was a treat for me. the way the intro comes in with these big bells and the stompy drums creates a cool atmosphere and i love the shrill stabbing synths. and the reverse scream sound at like 1:15 is crazy cool. at this point the song seems to stagnate a bit, from 1:30 up until the outro, and i feel like it could stand to be a little shorter for that reason. maybe because there's not much of a bridge? im not sure. regardless, i really like the outro!!

Mesage responds:

thank you for your feedback! it was a pleasure reading this and I'm glad you liked it!
I regret that I rushed the 1:30 to outro part.
I'll try not to make such mistakes again.

shredding is real! the metaphorically speaking bit was very funny

fuckin hardcore 🦈🦈🦈🦈

eerie is definitely right! am I hearing strategically based wrong notes? It's interesting. the pitch is super high, so I couldn't listen to it very loudly but, there is a mood here. very striking tone that I think matches with the title super well. it's very unsettling in how hard the song is almost, like, grinning at me. I really appreciate that the song strikes the way it does without getting too hyper and speedy about it.

yorusa responds:

thanks a lot for reviewing i appreciate it

I feel like the vocals are operating on a different key than the rest of the song. It sounds a little like square peg in the round hole. It's quite jarring, especially when the rest of the song is generally nice and inoffensive (for better or for worse) the re-drop that cuts the vocals out sets the piece back on track and the ending bit that starts at 2:40 is probably my favorite portion of the song overall. It's the most uniquely voiced portion of the song, whereas a lot of the first half is YouTube-Vlogger intro-y. I think this is my problem, though? I'm not sure... I feel like the song feels just a little cookie-cutter for the genre and I am left wanting more of what makes you as a producer tick. It seems very general in its progression and instrumentation. I hope this doesn't come across as rude. I wish you the best!

JustikShow responds:

Yo! Thanks for your review. I'll keep on trying to do my best.

yo i love this whoa

i let this rock on loop for a while ,, good shit, very nice :)

we love the alligators!

Charlmot responds:

Very much appreciated, glad you liked it!

i love when a song is so clearly built for a rhythm game, Geometry Dash or DDR or whatever have you. The notes in the guitar solo seemed especially daunting.

This track had me hyped up ngl.
I really enjoyed just about everything it had to offer!!

Each segment is a clean 8 or so seconds and the variation is always clean and interesting. You have a great sense of timing, and each instrument gets plenty of love. I really don't have much else to say!

It's a dope ass song to have in Geometry Dash and I bet the level is gonna be very fun for it. Well done :)

I also peeked at the original track of Surface and found it really impressive just how much amping up there is here. I also like the play on titles here, with the original being called "Surface" and this one diving deeper beneath. haha i see you!!

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