I agree with BBaNK on the bit about more character on the drums, but I love the droning nature of this, more than anything. I love the subdued nature of this apocalyptic presentation -- it's reminding me very much of the later tracks on Carpenter Brut's Trilogy LP -- I think it's a total vibe.
The way it dips out so fast it makes me think that there's another track that is meant to follow!
I would listen to this kinda stuff on long late night drives all the time when I was younger. Shit's hype :)