JimmyTheCaterpillar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maulve - Gloom]

albeit a bit slow and sparse, the progression here is pleasant -- i esp enjoyed how it picked up around 3:40. ty for sharing this!

Maulve responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
The song is supposed to be slow, but it was also my first time making a longer song
and I'm still having trouble managing the progression. Very happy that you liked it here!

[Silent hill [phonk]]

i really like the way you're implementing voice in yr work!

Vosh responds:

thanks

[30 sec]

this is hype -- i really enjoy the mood here

-- i think maybe shortening the middle quiet segment just a bit would probably help keep the interest, that's the only part where mine wavered -- mainly bc the instrumental wasn't really doing anything different beyond being quiet -- and i LOVE the main riff you have going here, but i def think a little variation throughout the rest of the song would do you well.

but good stuff regardless :)

Vosh responds:

thanks, but i must studing at school, so i haven't time to make something hard. This is just hobby

[Because We Miss You]

very lovely and compassionate. your grandmother must have been the same. wishing you well!

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

She most certainly was. Thank you! <3

[Scorpion Days]

from ng radio -
the vibe here rocks. ty for making this!

dustin2006 responds:

Thank you for listening.

[In The City!]

i think some more bass would help flesh this song out, as well as some additional drum parts. i really kept hoping for some hihats or other cymbals, more bass drum hits etc! despite that, the synth is fun and varied, and the snare is interesting and snappy throughout. the pacing of the song is good, though i feel the beginning was maybe a hair too long? the ending however, felt right! :D i enjoyed the work! ty for sharing

Themon4 responds:

I updated the song and now its 2 times better thank you

[The moment]

the female-sounding vocals emerging from that first crescendo was really inspired. you're building a valley of a scene here for sure, a forge!! it's the moment!!!! i also loved the guys coming back to fade out at the end the track, i cracked up a little bit !! thank you for sharing

Tensemusic responds:

Thank you Jimmy, I really appreciate the details of your feedback. Thank you so much! Have a nice day!

[360°]

i really like the feeling here. there's a sense of walking down city streets at night, a subdued urgency -- patient excitement.

i think you have a great sense of timing in how long each segment is -- great timing!

i think some better, more cohesive soundsets would do you wonders? i feel like the melodic devices were there, but the timbre on some of the instruments just kinda slap against each other.

the ending felt a bit tacked off, but i'm sure you can come up with a better one!

again i liked this a lot and i think you have a lot of room to grow. keep the energy!!!!

Themon4 responds:

Id say this one is one of my bad songs tho😅, Also thank you for commenting, when I saw a comment in the notifs I got realy happy you made my day.

[Fluffy]

I really enjoyed the intro into the first main segment at :50 or so, after that though the track loses my interest just a little bit -- I feel as if the transitional portions between the fuller parts kinda outstay themselves just a bit, even though the full parts are definitely worth it. That being said, the synths and pads you're using are all very fun and bouncy!! 3:02-3:10 is awesome!!!!!

Congrats on yr friend's engagement!!!!! very nice of you to make a song for them :)

LooPeR231 responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

[20210216_130417]

this shit is the MOMENT man holy shit this is the real shit, the way the drop just strides in at 2:53 and says oh hello there prepare 2 get rock3d omygod!!!!! i'm gonna go buy an egg timer rn and then throw it in the GARBAGE bc you're really doin it here -- thank you so much for uploading this, i'm mad grateful!!! i'll be listening to your other work too, this is some really inspired work !!!

akabomb responds:

thank you so much for the kind words :)