this is so awesome -- i love each individual part, it's such a tapestry!!! i really just kinda don't like dubstep but that doesn't mean i can't think this song is so dope -- very dancey, very hype.
this is so awesome -- i love each individual part, it's such a tapestry!!! i really just kinda don't like dubstep but that doesn't mean i can't think this song is so dope -- very dancey, very hype.
Thank you so much! I wanted to give it that more "chunked" build where the progression is very obvious! I was honestly expecting negative feedback but comments like this certainly reaffirm me :D Thank you again!
really enjoyed the chimes at 0:52 or so, it was really noticeable when they got louder with no variation in their progression though. the horn sounded a bit "nasally" in comparison to the rest of the track -- but i really enjoyed the vibe overall. very futuristic, kinda reminiscent to me of something that'd be in Va1-HallA! i enjoyed the piece, thank you :)
yeah i forgot to add it to the description but its literally my first ever composition so also take that to the equation
this was really nice!!! i love the mood forged by the piece, I enjoyed the progressions -- they were a little predictable, but honestly i didn't even mind, so pleasant was the piece. I also feel like you could have let the drums in a bit more throughout the song as opposed to just in the middle, but overall!!!! I really feel like you conveyed an optimistic lovely morning -- thank you!!!
cooool! ^^
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the chaos here, especially in the buildup from 0-0:30 is really hype -- i love how tight these drums are -- they really don't miss at all. i think the mix gets a littleeee off its rocker from 0:31-0:52 but you rein it in in the breakdown and the subsequent part at 1:20 or so, i really like that part! -- i love the subtle "oh" voice samples that are sprinkled in around 1:30!!! the way the track kinda burns up in disintegrates in its end is really well done if not drawn out just a hair,
overall this mulch is inspired, no doubt!!! really liked it man ty for sharing :)
/ps the dogs really add to the vibe :>
Thank you fellow mulch connoisseur
albeit a bit slow and sparse, the progression here is pleasant -- i esp enjoyed how it picked up around 3:40. ty for sharing this!
Thanks a lot for the feedback!
The song is supposed to be slow, but it was also my first time making a longer song
and I'm still having trouble managing the progression. Very happy that you liked it here!
i really like the way you're implementing voice in yr work!
thanks
this is hype -- i really enjoy the mood here
-- i think maybe shortening the middle quiet segment just a bit would probably help keep the interest, that's the only part where mine wavered -- mainly bc the instrumental wasn't really doing anything different beyond being quiet -- and i LOVE the main riff you have going here, but i def think a little variation throughout the rest of the song would do you well.
but good stuff regardless :)
thanks, but i must studing at school, so i haven't time to make something hard. This is just hobby
very lovely and compassionate. your grandmother must have been the same. wishing you well!
She most certainly was. Thank you! <3
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the vibe here rocks. ty for making this!
Thank you for listening.
i think some more bass would help flesh this song out, as well as some additional drum parts. i really kept hoping for some hihats or other cymbals, more bass drum hits etc! despite that, the synth is fun and varied, and the snare is interesting and snappy throughout. the pacing of the song is good, though i feel the beginning was maybe a hair too long? the ending however, felt right! :D i enjoyed the work! ty for sharing
I updated the song and now its 2 times better thank you
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