fun progression throughout -- reminds me of a more upbeat vein to Axiom Verge, especially with the bass drum. I really like the bass here.
I think the intro is a little long and the initial two sections are very samey, and the mixing doesn't lead to much of my interest.
after 0:55 though, there is a lot here to love -- the crunchy piano could probably be boosted a bit, but it's a great gateway into the meat of the song and the melody, which is all so panoramic and awesome. i love the variation and the way the instruments play off of each other. the kick-back in at 2:03 or so is well-executed as well.
I think the ending could have been executed a little better,, i understand cutting instruments out one-by-one for sure, but i feel like there's a better ending that's unique to this song hiding in there somewhere! i'd love to hear it!
i really really liked the core of this track, and i'm glad you shared it!! thank you :)
-- from the Review 4 Review BBS Thread