really lovely . thank you
really lovely . thank you
No, thank you
the mixing is way too sharp -- it's piercing my ears. you defffffinitely want to rein it back on the kicks, the intro sincerely hurts lol -- couldn't finish listening
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update: okay i deadass just seek this song out deliberately to listen to it, i seriously love this shit whoa!
this is awesome! I love the weight you've added to the synths, everything holds up so well!
Thanks. That means a lot.
i love how belligerently unhinged the scientist is, holy shit -- if you did the voice for it, kudos -- you fucking killlllllled it!!!! the song pacing isn't always consistent, but it's all very fun!! :) victory fanfare at the end; nice touch
thank you!! it's pitched down 4 semitones, but it is, in fact, my voice! really glad you liked the victory fanfare
ngl i tabbed away from this while it was playing and was really enjoying it, only to hear it cut off right as it was starting to pick up! i feel like there's definitely another minute and a half + of this song floating in the ether somewhere, but what is here is nice build-up/foundation for sure
i definitely agree with you that this song is unfinished! i'll probably come back to this one since i really like the melody i wrote for it
this is cool! i love the sound effects, like the bats in the beginning, or the gurgling at 0:54! very rad, like a scary coaster ride. you should tag this halloween2023! it would fit well
Thanks for the tag recommendation, I'll do it! And I'm glad you liked it so much!
fun progression throughout -- reminds me of a more upbeat vein to Axiom Verge, especially with the bass drum. I really like the bass here.
I think the intro is a little long and the initial two sections are very samey, and the mixing doesn't lead to much of my interest.
after 0:55 though, there is a lot here to love -- the crunchy piano could probably be boosted a bit, but it's a great gateway into the meat of the song and the melody, which is all so panoramic and awesome. i love the variation and the way the instruments play off of each other. the kick-back in at 2:03 or so is well-executed as well.
I think the ending could have been executed a little better,, i understand cutting instruments out one-by-one for sure, but i feel like there's a better ending that's unique to this song hiding in there somewhere! i'd love to hear it!
i really really liked the core of this track, and i'm glad you shared it!! thank you :)
-- from the Review 4 Review BBS Thread
Thank you for the review!
the snare sounds a little wet here and the fade-out near the end doesn't work exaactlyyy but you're really making strides!!!!! I love the subtle melody coursing underneath the main sounds, very lovely work!!!! truly one of the songest songs C:
Heh, thanks this one had audio issue from the start, I tried to fix them but It only made it worse, and then I wanted to back track because It was worse now and you can kinda see where that went. Thank you for the response!
i love the subdued lofi elements in a track that isn't completed encased by them. the waves in the background provided a really wonderful metronome and i love the way you used the pad! such great work :DD
thank you ! ^^
very chill! spaceyyy
thanks! :D
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