this is cool! i love the sound effects, like the bats in the beginning, or the gurgling at 0:54! very rad, like a scary coaster ride. you should tag this halloween2023! it would fit well
this is cool! i love the sound effects, like the bats in the beginning, or the gurgling at 0:54! very rad, like a scary coaster ride. you should tag this halloween2023! it would fit well
Thanks for the tag recommendation, I'll do it! And I'm glad you liked it so much!
fun progression throughout -- reminds me of a more upbeat vein to Axiom Verge, especially with the bass drum. I really like the bass here.
I think the intro is a little long and the initial two sections are very samey, and the mixing doesn't lead to much of my interest.
after 0:55 though, there is a lot here to love -- the crunchy piano could probably be boosted a bit, but it's a great gateway into the meat of the song and the melody, which is all so panoramic and awesome. i love the variation and the way the instruments play off of each other. the kick-back in at 2:03 or so is well-executed as well.
I think the ending could have been executed a little better,, i understand cutting instruments out one-by-one for sure, but i feel like there's a better ending that's unique to this song hiding in there somewhere! i'd love to hear it!
i really really liked the core of this track, and i'm glad you shared it!! thank you :)
-- from the Review 4 Review BBS Thread
Thank you for the review!
the snare sounds a little wet here and the fade-out near the end doesn't work exaactlyyy but you're really making strides!!!!! I love the subtle melody coursing underneath the main sounds, very lovely work!!!! truly one of the songest songs C:
Heh, thanks this one had audio issue from the start, I tried to fix them but It only made it worse, and then I wanted to back track because It was worse now and you can kinda see where that went. Thank you for the response!
i love the subdued lofi elements in a track that isn't completed encased by them. the waves in the background provided a really wonderful metronome and i love the way you used the pad! such great work :DD
thank you ! ^^
very chill! spaceyyy
thanks! :D
this is so awesome -- i love each individual part, it's such a tapestry!!! i really just kinda don't like dubstep but that doesn't mean i can't think this song is so dope -- very dancey, very hype.
Thank you so much! I wanted to give it that more "chunked" build where the progression is very obvious! I was honestly expecting negative feedback but comments like this certainly reaffirm me :D Thank you again!
really enjoyed the chimes at 0:52 or so, it was really noticeable when they got louder with no variation in their progression though. the horn sounded a bit "nasally" in comparison to the rest of the track -- but i really enjoyed the vibe overall. very futuristic, kinda reminiscent to me of something that'd be in Va1-HallA! i enjoyed the piece, thank you :)
yeah i forgot to add it to the description but its literally my first ever composition so also take that to the equation
this was really nice!!! i love the mood forged by the piece, I enjoyed the progressions -- they were a little predictable, but honestly i didn't even mind, so pleasant was the piece. I also feel like you could have let the drums in a bit more throughout the song as opposed to just in the middle, but overall!!!! I really feel like you conveyed an optimistic lovely morning -- thank you!!!
cooool! ^^
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the chaos here, especially in the buildup from 0-0:30 is really hype -- i love how tight these drums are -- they really don't miss at all. i think the mix gets a littleeee off its rocker from 0:31-0:52 but you rein it in in the breakdown and the subsequent part at 1:20 or so, i really like that part! -- i love the subtle "oh" voice samples that are sprinkled in around 1:30!!! the way the track kinda burns up in disintegrates in its end is really well done if not drawn out just a hair,
overall this mulch is inspired, no doubt!!! really liked it man ty for sharing :)
/ps the dogs really add to the vibe :>
Thank you fellow mulch connoisseur
albeit a bit slow and sparse, the progression here is pleasant -- i esp enjoyed how it picked up around 3:40. ty for sharing this!
Thanks a lot for the feedback!
The song is supposed to be slow, but it was also my first time making a longer song
and I'm still having trouble managing the progression. Very happy that you liked it here!
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