super tired rn so i cant go into super detail BUT i liked this a lot!!!!!!!!!!
super tired rn so i cant go into super detail BUT i liked this a lot!!!!!!!!!!
haha glad you liked it!
how the fuck have yall not been scouted yet. love your efforts let's be friends
Thanks so much!!!!!
this is hype I love the little lead that could!!
I love the percussion, I love the single off-key note that plays at 0:30 to signal in the heavier chords -- like honestly. I love the choppiness of it. There is a futuristic quality here that carries hope and mundanity in equal parts. It kinda reminds me of Laurie Anderson (Big Science; O Superman) whose energy I love.
Thank you this one is awesome! The name is hype too :D
haha thank you again! this song is pretty much just me experimenting with layering sounds and creating "landscapes" of sound and I am pretty proud of this too! im glad u liked it aswell :)
the overall atmosphere successfully is imposing and eerie.
however, I find a lot of the percussive qualities of the track feel off-beat, as if they're being played randomly across the bar with no real pattern. This is evident especially in portions like 0:55-1:00. I believe this sort of clashing is bringing down the track a bit.
I like the percussive sounds in a vacuum however -- the part I mentioned earlier, sounds like spoons scraping against a bowl and it's kinda freaky and I like it.
My favorite portion of the song is essentially 1:32-1:54, where it feels like everything is in the reins working together. The drop is cool, especially because the mood doesn't exactly stop. I love the kinda fake drop that happens right at 1:31, making way for the real one at 1:41. Very fun.
The ending is kinda metronome-y and I feel like that could be improved too!
Overall, this is an interesting track with some unique flavor and I appreciated the listen, thank you! Keep going :)
wow thank you so much for taking the time to write this!! i definetly agree on some parts the end was supposed to be like a metronome thingy but i appreciate you a lot for this review!!
I agree with BBaNK on the bit about more character on the drums, but I love the droning nature of this, more than anything. I love the subdued nature of this apocalyptic presentation -- it's reminding me very much of the later tracks on Carpenter Brut's Trilogy LP -- I think it's a total vibe.
The way it dips out so fast it makes me think that there's another track that is meant to follow!
I would listen to this kinda stuff on long late night drives all the time when I was younger. Shit's hype :)
That's a high compliment! I actually started this track off with nothing but the throat singing, a random dubstep drum loop that I clipped into dnb, and some samples I had made myself from clapstack cymbals. A huge experiment and a rush-job, but I think it paid off
One of these days I want to revisit and de-ess the vocals some more. I was recording 2 inches from an unshielded mic at whisper volume. You can kinda hear my Russian hard H and non-aspirated T aha
just about anything castlevania is positive to me!! right on!
Castlevania has some of the best VGM I've ever heard. Thanks for the review!
very much reminiscent of northern city and smog. funny how hope and certain desire can shine through despite.
i enjoyed this, thank you!
Nah dude thank *you* for the review boss
hype shit. i wish i had more to properly say beyond that i was engaged throughout the entire runtime and that you gave me a lot to think about in my own creative process with this song -- so thank you! i will eagerly check out your future/other work :)
thank you so much!
the clock ticking immediately sets thematic elements. cinematic is definitely the genre.
i love the skipping journey the piano takes on the lower octaves, i love the burst of energy in the piece, and the way it peels back to the strings and the piano and than smashes back on again -- it's all very inspired yeahyeah! i do find myself wondering where the clock went ;; not that i want it pervading the whole track, but its complete omission is a little curious.
I really really love the parts the bells play at the end of this; really good implementation of what can be a clumsy instrument.
right on!
Thank you for all your comments, you are so good at giving feedback that It made me want to hear my own songs again XD
Thank you!
this goes nuts! i really the groaning that becomes chorus that becomes groaning again. so cool
Thanks Jimmy!
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